Monday, 30 January 2012

Animatic Version 2

This is the 2nd version of my animatic and the final version. I took all the suggestions that were given to me from CGCoach, tutors and friends, and tried to compile it all together so it flowed well. Many of the changes were things like moving the horizon line down, making the composition more interesting, adding new shots so it made sense and of course, adding in the origami animals (which I should have added first time round, seeming as they are the main spectacle)!  I hope you enjoy it, and any problems with timing etc will now be addressed in the 3D animation, as time is getting on.


2 comments:

  1. Great - really enjoyed it - the only comment I would make is at 26 seconds, the plane going over the wall - I needed to look twice to understand it was the wall. Maybe if wall had some pattern on it (eg castellation) when shown next to the door, and then as plane goes over, it would make it more immediately obvious. Great piece of work otherwise!!

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  2. Arrgg Dammit! I came on this blog to learn about putting origami animals in my garden :( However, I agree with Tone.

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